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Post by Hatakelovebirds on Sept 2, 2011 23:59:47 GMT -6
Name: Mura
Age: 19
Height: 4'6"
Weight: 75 (Underweight, but I'm thinking that this is deliberate?)
Gender: Female
Race: Human, Ninja
Appearance: Amber Geisha styled hair (high updo with various pins), eyes bolded and tilted by eyeliner, face powdered white, thin lips pink. Wears a simplified version of a Kimono with a metal mesh underneath. Obi is partially metal too. Kimono is pure white as to the deep violet obi.
Personality: As what expected of a geisha girl. She is pay to act like Haku, Zabuza’s partner. Sweet, innocent, blah.
Background: Lived most her life as an apprentice geisha and ninja.
Roleplay Sample: Her tongue still stayed swell red, redder than it had ever been before. Serving meekly for customers after customer in a fairly wealthy and tame restaurants was not so bad. The chairs were soft, tables were polished smooth. Even their customers came from a high class, where most of them simply go with tea and some food to nibble.
Being thrown at with a piece of china was not something Mura had expected from a particularly drunk man, and a drunk was solemnly was seen at the expensive restaurant. Those who dine and socialized here was self-prideful enough to never reach the state of smelling of alcohol. After biting her tongue to keep herself from crying out from being embedded with china, she broke when the man growled, “ Another cup of sake.” As if nothing had happened.
Her hands griped the broken shards and pulled them out, throwing them expertly at the man’s throat. The store shook with screams as their customers hurried out the door as he slumped down the floor, dead.
Other (Abilities, etc):
Breaking Point: Being with a man who is no gentleman.
An uncharacteristically sweet-acting man earning her trust through romantic gestures, and then playing "heartbreaker."
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Post by hatakelovebirds on Sept 7, 2011 22:12:02 GMT -6
Name: Mura
Age: 19
Height: Around 4-5 ft
Weight: Average, a little less because of small delicate bones
Gender: Female
Race: Human, Ninja
Appearance: Amber Geisha styled hair (high updo with various pins), eyes bolded and tilted by eyeliner, face powdered white, thin lips pink. Wears a simplified version of a Kimono with a metal mesh underneath. Obi is partially metal too. Kimono is pure white as to the deep violet obi.
Personality: What of expected of a geisha girl, being sweet, innocent, emotionless, all that jazz. When she was younger, she was what you would call someone who was fairly sad all the time. Not moping, just has that cloudy look in her eyes.
Positive traits: accepts authority, devoted, cooperative, humble, and tolerant.
Negative traits (When she was younger and allowed to show these traits, here they are.): Rude, stubborn, spiteful, unappreciative, cruel. All the traits that would make up a popular kid today. These were washed away after a year of living free before becoming an apprentice geisha and ninja.
In conclusion: In the modern world, she would have had all the traits to become one of the popular kids. Instead, after the two years of being simply a maid and having her own free will, she was forced to think and act like a proper high-class geisha and ninja.
Background: Lived most her life as an apprentice geisha and ninja in training. At the age of four, she started living as a housemaid. When she lived to be 6, she is given the role of an apprentice geisha and learning to be a ninja from books. She finally had enough strength at age 14 to actually call her a ninja. Though she is fairly weak nevertheless.
Roleplay Sample: Her tongue still stayed swell red, redder than it had ever been
before. Serving meekly for customers after customer in a fairly wealthy and tame restaurants was not so bad. The chairs were soft, tables were polished smooth. Even their customers came from a high class, where most of them simply go with tea and some food to nibble.
Being thrown at with a piece of china was not something Mura had expected from a particularly drunk man, and a drunk was solemnly was seen at the expensive restaurant. Those who dine and socialized here was self-prideful enough to never reach the state of smelling of alcohol. After biting her tongue to keep herself from crying out from being embedded with china, she broke when the man growled, “ Another cup of sake.” As if nothing had happened.
Her hands griped the broken shards and pulled them out, throwing them expertly at the man’s throat. The store shook with screams as their customers hurried out the door as he slumped down the floor, dead.
Other (Abilities, etc):
Breaking Point: Being with a man who is no gentleman. No, she will not go and just be psycho and start hating any one who is no gentleman. I mean, it’s her job to treat those guys nicely, right?
(You can customize stats for your characters. 50 points total is allowed, distribute them however you'd like with a max of 10 points per stat.)
HP:
Physical Attack: 4
Physical Defense: 7
Special Attack: 9
Special Defense: 10
Speed: 5
Agility: 6
Skill: 10
Energy Reserves/Stamina: 2
As a side note, this character was specific special one, made originally to be a Mary-sue of some sort. So, if it’s too much like one, please tell me.
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Post by Mina on Sept 8, 2011 14:16:40 GMT -6
Almost done~
But we ask that you put down a more specific height. I don't mean to be nit-picky, but it's very possible that every single detail could be used as a possible plot device. For instance, there's a great difference between someone who's 4'1" and someone who's 5 feet flat. The former could hide in a suitcase or something like that, but someone who's five feet tall might not be able to. There has to be a line drawn somewhere, so that your character can respond appropriately to any situation in the most realistic way.
Same reasoning goes for weight.
The breaking point has to be more specific for about the same reason, too. There has to be a specific, exact trigger that can justify making your character five times more powerful than in an ordinary situation. Whether it's a serious death threat, or if her hypothetical best friend is in danger, there has to be a specific thing you can point to and say, "This is the thing I was talking about."
Being with a "man who is no gentleman" can mean anything. Maybe you have something in mind already, but we have no idea what it is. And while I don't believe you'll abuse it, there has to be something we agree on, just for the sake of honest to goodness simple finality. If you happened to go crazy one afternoon (purely hypothetical scenario) and announced that your character's reached breaking point because she saw a man picking earwax out of his ears, then we wouldn't be able to say no. Because the breaking point you put down for the app correlates.
Hope this clears it up.
(Also, you're three points over on your stat customization.)
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Post by hatakelovebirds on Sept 8, 2011 18:19:20 GMT -6
Height: 4" 6
Weight: 75
Other (Abilities, etc):
Breaking Point: Being with a man who is no gentleman. No, she will not go and just be psycho and start hating any one who is no gentleman. I mean, it’s her job to treat those guys nicely, right?
She could take someone who takes advantage of her and treats her like a no good djnn. Being actually loved or affectioned by someone who is no gentleman and is very gentle with her brings her to flames. Yes, she will act rationaly at the time being with the said person. And afterwords. But the point when she cannot not take it anymore, I prefer her to die soonly after.
The reason why is because her brother was the only one who loved her. She always used to fidle on his lap and play with him. Now, ever since she was 6, her brother disappeared and she was suppose to lead a life of a proper geisha and ninja.
HP:
Physical Attack: 4
Physical Defense: 6
Special Attack: 7
Special Defense: 10
Speed: 5
Agility: 6
Skill: 5
Energy Reserves/Stamina: 2
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Post by Princess Beta on Sept 8, 2011 21:50:42 GMT -6
Not to nitpick or offend you, but in my opinion (I'm walking on eggshells. Over a minefield. X3) , that tells little more.
Honestly, most people out there will take advantage of people.
To what extent is it needed?
And if she's acting rationally at the time, and for a while afterwords, then it's not breaking point worthy. Most breaking points are things that send them into a murderous rage. Or they're in a near death situation.
In my opinion, which you have every right to ignore, you should probably choose a completely different breaking point.
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Post by Mina on Sept 8, 2011 22:07:44 GMT -6
I think you could pull off the "can't deal with the emotional foreign-ness of kindness and love" bit, but it'll need a little bit more definition to it. For instance, maybe if this man tried to kiss her or something. I don't know, and I probably won't be able to help you choose a specific trigger, because emotional-freaky things scare me. xD But yeah, along those lines. You can choose any action you like.
And Beta brings up a good point. A breaking point is an immediate response to something traumatic, according to the way the FA system works. We've never had anything as singularly unique as yours is, but it could definitely work, if you just specify a bit further. x3
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Post by hatakelovebirdie on Sept 9, 2011 20:51:26 GMT -6
Really? I thought there would be alot of this type of breaking point thingy. Well, to specify it further...
An non-gentleman that would play and pull the stings of her heart, making it seem as if she was the one controling him with sweetness. Then, when he suddenly got her trust far enough, and he would start chasing another. In her line of job, she can't trust anyone. So to earn it would be difficult.
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Post by Mina on Sept 12, 2011 13:09:27 GMT -6
So, in short, if she gets cheated on - or something equivalent. I like it. ;D Shall be approved.
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