Sayel Rokkam [Approved]

[Sayel Rokkam]

Name:Sayel Rokkam
Age:22
Height:5'10"
Weight:147lbs
Gender:Male
Race:Human Gifted
Appearance:He has chin legth blue hair and a slender but calm face. His eyes have red hue that is deep enough to look brown unless in light. He wears a blacks tank top and a choker with a shield crest. His left arm is adorned with a light weight gauntlet resembling claw. Pant are black cargos with two straps across the back and a gun holster on the right leg. Combat boots..simple simple
Personality: Sayel has a calm defensive mannerism. He is convinced without him, anyone close to him may fall. He is a martyr by nature and will defend in a flash. He tends to act in response, rather than talking heads on. "Action and Reaction. The Reaction is equal and will negate the action and become neutal. And a neutral plane means peace."
Background:Sayel lived a fairly average life: suburban home in America, loving family, beautiful girlfriend, everything a teenager could need. Until, that is, his girlfriend died. He knew of gifteds were becoming mor common so she and him felt like looking into it for a science project. Wlak to the library. Idiot driver. Sayel cowarding instead of saving her. Got a picture? After checking her pulse in terror, he realized she had passed on. His hair became the deep indigo of today, eyes irises reddened. He had discovered his gift. The Aeigus Arm. Around his left hand had devoleped navy scales and a cerulean field of energy, shifting to his will. He decided from then on he would gaurd the people he loved without hesitation. He left home, took up a a revolver and learned gunplay from a local mercernary name Nente. He now travels to find new loved ones to defend with the Aegis.
Roleplay Sample:"Look guys you need to chill." Sayel called to his two bickering allies. "Debating on which path won't get us anywhere we need. So let's go..." Saye paused and pointed to the left path. "That way. Seems calm enough" It wasn't. Night fell and it was camp time and Sayel insisted on guard duty. He started to drift asleep, until a brustling shocked him awake. The shadowed figure jumped from the tree and proceeded on his attempt to rob the camp. Sayel jumped up and charged like a ravaging bull. His gauntlet glowed blue and formed a an aura field in a wedge like shape. The bandit didn't see the ram coming but definately learned his lesson. He fled jumping in a tree. "Bastard isn't gonna get anything of ours." Sayel sat back on his log and continued his guard duty.
Other (Abilities, etc): The Aegis Arm is a mutation in which his arm develped blue scales radiating aura that can be shaped to the will of user. The Arm is kind of like a scaled claw with a faint glow. Looks like this: www.tesnexus.com/downloads/images/35383-2-1287978835.jpg just the size of a normal arm and with a more scaled, reptilian look. The scales separate from the arm and form a shield, wedge, spinning blade, elbow blade, etc. Sayel usually keeps it to a defensive state rather than a blade. He is also well skilled in the use of pistols.
Breakin Point: The loss of the Aegis Arm.

(You can customize stats for your characters. 50 points total is allowed, distribute them however you'd like.)

HP:10
Physical Attack:4
Physical Defense:4
Special Attack:2
Special Defense:8
Speed:4
Agility:2
Skill:10
Energy Reserves/Stamina:6

[Creator]

Looks good, just one thing. The breaking pint is a bit too vague. It has to be something big, because the breaking point only happens once. A lot of peoples are along the lines of 'their whole family dying' or 'race dyeing out', so something like a person dying that he could have prevented is a little too small. ^^

Also, what's the Aegis Arm do exactly? Like, what can it transform into and the like.

[Sayel Rokkam]

Thank you for the critique. I think I'll change his breaking to the loss of the Aegis Arm. The Arm is kind of like a scaled claw with a faint glow. Looks like this: www.tesnexus.com/downloads/images/35383-2-1287978835.jpg just the size of a normal arm and with a more scaled, reptilian look. The scales seperate from the arm and form a shield, wedge, spinning blade, elbow blade, etc. Sayel usually keeps it to a defensive state rather than a blade.

[Tyyni]

Level Thingeh:

1-14: Basic Sharpness, can control a minimum of 75 scale clumps (shield, platform, etc), withstand a small force, like a heavy punch or fireball.
15-34: Gains sharpness, 50 scale clumps that react quicker, withstand jack hammer force.
35-64: Ever sharper, 25 scales with that are highly manipulative (shield in one spot, break and reform hastily a max of 4 feet away), withstand a Large car hit at 45mph, can ride on top of a platform Static Shock style.
65-89: Can control individually, can withstand a train wreck, scale can explode in a flash bomb (regens of course)
90-100: Ultimate Control (Extreme speed and precision), scales explode like a grenade, with stand a very large building falling
100+: Explosion gains strength per level, as well as withstanding force increase